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My manuscript consultation service offers a variety of editorial packages tailored to writers to help them prepare for agency submission, deepen their storytelling, and navigate the querying process.

These services are perfect for writers at different stages:

  • New to querying and seeking guidance on approaching agencies

  • Writers who feel stuck in their manuscript and need help diagnosing what’s not working

  • Writers looking for manuscript coaching to complete a finished draft

Each package includes a virtual 1-hour meeting with Kerry-Ann Bentley, where she’ll offer additional insights and answer your burning questions.

Email to book a service, including a brief of your manuscript and desired schedule.

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Services

Agency Submission Package Review 1 (5,000 words) - £140 GBP

I’ll review your pitch letter, synopsis, and the first 3 chapters of your submission package to literary agencies, providing feedback on all three.

You’ll receive a detailed letter with constructive feedback, followed by a 1-hour virtual call (phone or video) to go over any questions you have.

Agency Submission Package Review 2 + Editorial Report (20,000 words) - £250 GBP

I’ll review your agency submission package and provide an editorial report on the first 20,000 words of your novel (adult or children’s). You’ll receive in-depth feedback on plot, character development, structure, and market viability.

We’ll follow up with a 1-hour virtual call to discuss the feedback and any questions you have.

Agency Submission Package Review 3 + Fiction Manuscript Coaching (100,000 words max) - £500 GBP

I’ll review your agency submission package and provide an editorial report on the full manuscript of your novel (adult or children’s). This includes detailed feedback on plot, character development, structure, and market viability, with specific guidance on revisions.

You’ll also receive two 1-hour virtual calls: the first to discuss feedback and the second to discuss the revised manuscript.

What Clients Say About My Editorial Consultantations…

  • "Kerry-Ann has been fantastic to work with. She provided thorough notes on my manuscript, giving detailed thoughts and suggestions for moving forwards. Her developmental report examined writing, plot, conflict, tension and characters. With her guidance, I was able to pin down the elements of my story that weren't working, and come up with a plan for how to tackle these." - J Skinner

    Package 3

    Historical Fiction

  • "I’m really pleased with the detail of your feedback and thank you for all your industry points..., I’ll have a wealth of information to glean from your reports in order to adjust before sending my next round (of agent queries)" - R Miller

    Package 2

    Literary Fiction